topic
the surprise in the city, public art
main idea
public art has been around our life for just a few years. for most of the people, it's quite a new thing. however, these years, public art is easily to be found in the city. but why do we have to have these public art around us?
outline
1)the whole history of public art isn't really long.
2)people in the city can find public art just beside us but we often ignore it.
3)in the artists' opinion, they think
4)Hsi Shih-Pin has exhibited his art work in Songshan Cultural and Creative Park and has impressed me a lot.
the surprise in the city, public art
main idea
public art has been around our life for just a few years. for most of the people, it's quite a new thing. however, these years, public art is easily to be found in the city. but why do we have to have these public art around us?
outline
1)the whole history of public art isn't really long.
2)people in the city can find public art just beside us but we often ignore it.
3)in the artists' opinion, they think
4)Hsi Shih-Pin has exhibited his art work in Songshan Cultural and Creative Park and has impressed me a lot.
The topic can be more specific.
回覆刪除Ex: topic--Public art: a possibility of creativity in our everyday lives.
(Say what the surprise is.)
Main idea: We should have public art because ... (List the keywords for every paragraph here.)
I don't see your opinions in the topic sentences in the outline.
Ex: topic sentence for paragraph 1: I will give a short introduction of the history of public art.
a.
b.
c.
Topic sentence for paragraph 2: We often ignore public art because ...
(What are the reasons?)
a.
b.
c.
Topic sentence for paragraph 3: The artists give us a different perspective on public art. They think ...
a.
b.
c.
You can use Shih as an example in paragraph 3.